lunes, 17 de septiembre de 2012

Written assessment I (3rd term) - REPORT-

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  1. Hi students! Here you have this new entry to post your compositions. See you tomorrow!

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  2. Hi Teacher!

    I´m posting the composition about the proverbs
    I will post the written assessment I later.

    "A loveless life is a Living death" is one of the most popular proverbs around the world and it has different meanings for people.

    Personally, I think that loving other people makes you feel comfortable and happy, and it doesn´t matter if they love you or not,because it is not a competition or a waste of love.

    Everybody knows that love can be dangerous and sometimes you get hurt and disappointed from some relationships or friendships, because people are not obliged to love each other in the same way and it has not to be equal. But don´t worry, It´s part of life.

    In conclusion, I believe that love is a beautiful feeling from the bottom of your heart and makes you feel alive and, as the command says, love the others as you love yourself.

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  4. Art ski trip

    The purpose of this report is to highlight the weak points of the organization during the ski trip. I have talked with all the students about the journey to find out what their concerns were.

    It seems that almost all students were dissatisfied with the arrangements. The first problem presented was that, since that there was no snow lower down the mountain, the ski excursion was slightly enjoyed by them because, as soon as they threw downhill, they had to stop and go back up.
    The other issue is that the trip included just one-hour ski lessons, and this left them unhappy with the service because they had to pay for the remaining two days of ski.

    I would like to point out that the passengers spent a good time but they could had a better journey, so I have no hesitation in recommending a change of location the next year in order to make the journey more worthwhile.

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  5. College ski trip

    Introduction
    The aim of this report is to highlight the problems that occurred during the half-term ski trip. I have discussed the issue with the members of the organising committee.

    Location
    It appears that some students were unhappy with the location. They were expecting more than a small cabin with 3 bedrooms. Some students had to sleep on the floor because there weren’t enough beds in the cabins, so it made them uncomfortable.

    Organisation
    The main problem with the organisation was that only one-hour ski-lesson was included in the price. All those I interviewed believed that more hours were included, so they were angry and disappointed.
    Besides some group leaders were more interested in skiing than looking after students. Many of the students complained about that because they felt group leaders weren’t doing their job as they should be.

    Recommendations for next year
    Clearly, there were many problems with the location, so everyone think it should be changed next year. Group leaders must be responsible and they have to look after students too, so we have no hesitation in recommending group leaders more trained for this job in order to make students more comfortable and secure.

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  6. Ski Trip.

    The main reason for writing this report is to remark all the failures regarding the location and organisation of the ski trip which took part just a few days ago in Nepal.

    First of all, many students of mine have shown a clear disappointment about the accommodation, more specifically the conditions of the cabin we stayed in. The lack of heating and the fact that there were not enough bedrooms for the whole people made us to feel quite uncomfortable.

    Secondly, there were some problems in the organisation of the trip. A confusion in the skiing lessons´ timetables ended up forcing us to spend only one hour in the mountain, as we had arranged to spend four hours there. In addition, a great number of group leaders were keen on having fun rather than taking care of the students.

    To sum up, I highly recommend for the next year choosing more carefully the people who are responsible for the children´s safety and booking a better accommodation.

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  7. Student Travel

    Introduction
    The purpose of this report is to inform the problems occurred during the half-term ski trip. I have discussed these issues with all the participants and we reach to some points in common: there wasn’t snow lower down the ski trail and there was only one-hour of ski lessons.

    Location
    It appears that some students were dissatisfied with the slope location. The main problem was that the place where the activity was being held was not appropriate, there wasn’t snow lower down and that could have resulted in a terrible accident.

    Organization
    It was not of our knowledge that only one hour ski-lessons were included in the price and if we had known that before, we may have gone already trained because the lessons were not helpful at all.

    Conclusion and recommendation
    All things considered, the students had a good journey but lessons need to be learnt for the future. So we have no hesitation in recommending that next time you change the location in order to make the journey more beneficial and all the passengers feel comfortable with the activities.

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  9. College Ski Trip

    The purpose of this report is to highlight the problems about the location and organization that the students had in their ski trip abroad. I have sent out questionnaires to all students to know more about the concerns.

    Location

    The first problem was the location. There was no snow lower down the mountain so the students did not enjoy the ski excursion too much because they could not do a lot without snow. Then, some student had to sleep in the floor because there were not enough beds in the cabins.

    Organisation

    It appears that most of the students were unhappy with the arrangements. Only one-hour ski-lessons were included in the price so they didn’t learn enough about the sport.

    Conclusion

    On balance, the passengers spent a great time in their trip but it could be better. It is recommended a change in the location the next year.

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  11. College Ski Trip

    The aim of this report is to highlight the problems that ocurred during the half-term ski trip, as some students were unhappy with the arrangements.

    It appears that there weren't enough beds in the cabins and some students had no choise apart from sleeping on the floor. There is no apologise acceptable for this cause we had paid for a complete accommodation. Not surprisingly, most of them returned with a constant pain in their backs and are recommended to do a complete rest for at least, a week.

    Another problem was that some group leaders were more interested in skiing than looking after students. Indeed, as there weren't enough beginners' slopes, some of them had to ski in the advanced ones, running the risk to get seriously injured.

    On balance, it is recommended that you have a better organization in regard to the number of beds according to the students. Clearly, you should expand the beginners' area and find leaders who take care of their group. If you consider making this changes, future students will have a more enjoyable trip.

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  12. College Ski Trip.

    Introduction.

    The purpose of this report is to point out some of the problems of the College SKI trip.
    I have sent out questionnaires to all of the students to prepare it.
    I would like to thank the principal for the confidence he has given me in the writing of this report.


    Accommodation

    All those I interviewed said that some of them had to sleep on the floor because there were not enough beds.
    Not surprisingly, the restaurant at the hotel lacked the adequate capacity for many people at the lunch time.

    Organization

    It is said that The main problem was the ineffectiveness of the group leaders. They were supposed to pay attention and to solve the problems but It appears that they were more interested in skiing than looking after the group.

    Conclusion

    Clearly, the students believed that the trip would have been an exciting experience, if the group leaders had fulfilled their duties. In the light of this conclusion, I recommend to use a trip planner to quickly and easily organize the next trip.

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  13. College Ski Trip

    Introduction:
    The purpose of this report is to consider the problems and make recommendations to the Principal about a ski trip abroad students in our college have just done.

    The Organisation:
    The main problem was that ski lessons lasted only one hour, while the students would have prefered them to be at least a bit longer.
    Next year, you could arrange with the instructors to spend more time giving explanations and teaching them about the techniques and the sport.

    Location:
    Although this wasn't the most important part of the trip, it caused many problems among the students. They strongly complained about not only the rooms where they were staying but also about the conditions of the place where their activities were developed.

    Recommendations for next year
    As a conclusion, and after being remarked all this complaints, I would recommend to change location the following year. That way, the students will be more comfortable with their trip and won't complain any more.

    Tatiana

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  14. Report on problems during a ski trip abroad

    Introduction:
    The aim of this report is highlight the problems that the students had while they were on their half-term ski trip.
    There were a number of inconvenients about the location and organisation that I am about to describe.

    Hardly snowy paths:
    The main problem was that the first day of ski the tracks were hardly snowed so the students couldn't enjoy fully their excursion. In addition, as the climate hadn't changed, it is said that some passengers have left early.

    Short Lessons:
    It appears that the one-hour ski lesson is not enough and it may be because some group leaders stayed talking to the instructors and in consecuence the lesson didn't last exactly the arranged time.

    Conclusion and recommendation:
    All things considered, in my opinion for the next year trip you should change the location because it is thought that there will be even less snow . Apart from that I recommend you to change the time lasting of the lessons.

    Silvestrin Florencia

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  15. College Ski Trip

    The aim of this report is maybe highlight or remark all the problems of the Ski trip, because the students told me that they were unhappy with many things.

    Accomodation

    Students said that the accommodation was terrible. Bedrooms were smaller, there were not enough beds, many of them had to sleep on the floor because they were 6 for each room, and only 2 beds. So if you told us that the rooms were bigger, why lie to us?

    Organization

    Another problem was that the organization, for example only one-hour ski-lessons were included in the price. All those i asked told me they believed that more hours were included and not one, so they were angry and very disappointed because they love that sport and it is the only place that have this kind of sport.

    Recommendations

    On balance it is recommended that change this points because students have been waiting this opportunity for years and you can't go every week to this kind of trip. I hope you understand and change this in a future so everybody can enjoy the trip.

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  16. College ski trip
    In order to prepare this report I sent out questionnaires to all participants who told us what they like and dislike. So the report describes the complete experience of our pupils.
    Location
    The student said that they like the beautiful landscape they visited, full of mountains, forest and lakes despite they couldn´t enjoy it at all because there wasn´t enough snow to ski and also enough slopes for everybody. This problem was particularly situated on this area where it hardly snows.
    Organisation
    The main problem was that only one-hour ski-lessons were included in the price and the students did not even how to ski. Another problem was related with the accommodation, as there weren´t enough beds in the cabins some students had to sleep on the floor.
    Recommendations for next year
    Although the problems we had, the students really had fun and the trip became an unforgettable experience for them. All things considered, lessons need to be learnt for the future and also a handbook which list the group leaders duties should be included but the most important thing is to change the location for the next year.

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  17. College Ski-Trip
    Introduction.
    The aim of this report is to highlight the problems that occurred during the half-term ski trip. I had talked with some of the students, and all of them agreed that they were disappointed about the location and organisation.
    Location.
    The first problem was that it appears that the students were unhappy with the location. I asked to them and the answered that the main problem was that some of them had to sleep on the floor because there weren’t enough beds.
    The second problem was that there was no snow lower down, so the students couldn’t enjoy the ski lessons.
    Organisation.
    The problem with the organisation was that the students complained because they only had one hour ski lessons, and that wasn’t enough to learn and do the activity. And what is more, some groups of leaders were more interested in skiing than looking after students.
    Recommendation for next year.
    For the next year all this things are going to be considerate. In order to improve, the leaders are going to be changed and the ski lessons longer. And regarding to the location, we are going to book the rooms with anticipation.

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  18. College Ski Trip
    In order to prepare this report I have already talked to the students who have been part of this ski trip. We agreed that location and organization were the main topics of all the problems we had during the travel.
    Location
    The main mistake according to the planning of the trip is the city that was chosen. It is not a touristic place, so we got really bored when we weren´t skying. A center mall o a fair would have been appropriate to spend our free time at. Another thing that disappointed the group was that the snow could only be seen on the top of the mountain, over the skiing racetracks. So lower down it was the same weather than our home city.
    Organisation
    Related to this, it appears that ski lessons were not approved by most of the students, they were too short (only one hour) and they couldn’t learn everything that was taught because of the lack of time to practice.
    Skiing equipment was also a negative point. Skies seemed to be old and most of the time the feet were grabbed in a wrong way so that it was easier to fall down or it hurt.
    Concluding
    All things considered, we agree that for the next year another place should be chosen. We recommend a well known touristic city, prepared to receive such a big group of students, with other attractions apart from skiing, in order to guarantee a complete and fun trip.

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  19. PROBLEMS AND SOLUTIONS.

    The reason I’m writing this report is because I am part of the organising committee of this year ski trip and you sir, have asked me to take notes about the problems that may have been presented on said trip. After conducting several surveys to the students, I came across with two main problems.

    Location

    The first problem and the one students complaint the most was the location; at least thirty per cent of the students agreed that the piste wasn’t snowy enough and that made skiing very difficult. They also complaint about the chairlifts, they seemed quite dangerous and neglected, they noticed that there was an injurious amount of ice accumulated on the floor and when the chairlift arrived it could get really slippery and you might get hurt.

    Organisation

    On the other hand, is the organisation problem, which fifty per cent of the group complaint about. The students said and I quote “The group organiser was nowhere to be seen!” Half of the group agreed on that statement and some of them said that when they had a specific problem, such as a medical situation, the group organiser would just disappear; they also stated that both of the group organisers were really reckless and neglectful.

    Concluding

    To sum up this report, as a part of the organising committee, I feel compelled to recommend a new location for the next year ski trip, and it would be appropriate to hire new personnel of group organisers.

    Melisa.

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  20. As a member of the organising committee I am writing in order to notify the problems happened. What is more, I want to propose something new for the following year. Students that have just returned from the ski trip told me that they had different issues.

    The main problem was the organisation because students had only one hour of ski lessons. This produced a lot of problems, because they could not learn in such a small period of time and they could not keep skiing. That’s the reason why they had som much free time during the trip, they reach a point where they did not know what to do.

    Another problem was that the location was not appropriate. Students complained that there was not enough snow lower down. Te city is not prepared for tourists and during their spare time they got really bored. If only they could spend more time skiing this would not have been a problem.

    On balance it is recommended that you change the location for the next year. However, you should improve your organisation as well because it was not good enough.

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  21. Problems and Solutions

    Introduccion
    The aim of this report is to highlight some of the problems of The College Skitrip. I have descussed the issue with all the students of the trip

    Location
    It appears that some students were unhappy with the arragements. The group was concerned that there were no snow lower dowm and there weren't enough begginer's slopes which seemed dangerous and difficult for the students

    Organization
    All those I interviewed complained and said that only one hour skilessons were included in the price and then there weren't sufficient beds in the cabins. As a result, most of the passengers got bored and some of them had to sleep on the floor

    Conclusion
    Clearly, we have no hesitation in recommending to find another place because visitors are more interested in enjoying than complaining about problems that should not exist.

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